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Wine Store Revision #2 & 3 other pages
Hi guys,
Thank you for your comments! I tried to follow as many of your tips as possible. Main revisions are based on the below:
1. Navigation -
2. Type - Eliminating italics as Ariel suggested looks much better. Also, I separated a color for dynamic text by Ed’s suggestion.
3. Liam - hours on the right top corner is fixed. Wine glass photo, however, was not popular among the class last week. It made the site look more like a restaurant than a wine store…
Bottle of the week are supposed to be the shipments that arrived recently and the ones store wants to sell off as quickly as possible before the next shipment that could take up the small store space.
Anyway, your comments are always welcome!
New three pages with grid
Star Struck v.2.0
Cane international page2
Cane international Update
So here are my first two pages revised. The feedback I got so far is that the color choice was not great, so I tried to tone it down by using more blue. I may change the blue to be even darker. I also had the problem that there was too much information on the first page. So I decided to have a summary of all current projects with big pictures as my first page. You then go through the menu on the left side to receive more information on each project.
Parco - Design Round 2
Based on all the wonderful comments here is my revised versions.
Im still working on relevant images that will help portray a cafe and what exactly Parco is. For now i just placed some random images of objects in the cafe. In the morning i plan to go take some better photos maybe with some close ups of actual coffee and croissants. Hopefully those will be more appropriate than what i had before and the placeholders i have in there now. I will post the new photos sometime tomorrow for your further feedback.
As for the coffee logo on the homepage, i thought it made sense because aparently that coffee brand is pretty good and the peeps over at Parco are proud to serve it because it lures customers for a more “premium coffee” than your average deli. That was my reasoning behind that, but i totally agree the logo was distracting. I hope the grayscale version works better.
The menu page i fought over having a sub menu or having one long page to scroll through. I ended up posting the version with sub menus breaking up the menu. Alternatively i could have a sub menu but still have a long page and the menu would just “jump to section” along the long page. Suggestions please!
No tag for this post.Chinese Restuarant:first round design
hi all…please take a look and tell me how you feel, much appreciated…thank you….it is a site for chinese delivery and take out restaurant.
Golden Farm Revisions
I hope Lan is happier with the spacing 
Anuranjan, I changed the recipe of the week to product of the week. You’re right, it makes more sense! -Ariel
Heavenly Cakes revised
Hey guys. So, here’s the new version. Cleaned up. Simplified, built within approx 800 pixels (I think that’s basically what I was told in class). Any new suggestions are HIGHLY welcome
Dragon Ben- Round 2
Thank you all for comments in the class an the blog. It made my life interesting!
Here’s round 2, Dragon Ben reloaded:
About Page
Class Schedule Page:
info arch
dear all…im trying to catch up the class. This is my infoarch for the Chinese delivery/takeout restaurant. Please check it out and give some feedback!!!! Thank you all
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